All Comments on 'At A Moment's Notice Ch. 01'

by mochaleeshus

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
A moment...

Not much of a story, but you're laying foundations. Forget it's a story - let 'em act (and talk) naturally.

Lukas

don87654don87654over 16 years ago
Great. and very natural

They need to start their own society, preferably a naked one.

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