by jeffss45
Didn't quite like the direction the other set of stories took neither, looking forward to the new series.
i liked this story but i would have really liked to have known what happened after the last chapter, of the other series.
keep writing!
Great stories... Keep writing, i hope you will continue, you have great skill... I look forward to moment when this guy would be teased and tortured by some evillish girl like in the cabin ch. 07 but in the end be allowed to release...
I was quite disappointed with where you took the previous story so I'm very glad you've restarted it. I really like your writing and hope you continue to keep this story consensual and fun while being so inventive with the teasing.
Yay more tease stories!
I think he should give up on trying to talk her into using the machine on herself--it doesn't seem to be her thing. But maybe she'll love seeing him use it on himself? That could be hot.
I was really enjoying your first cabin story, right up to the crazies in ch. 07. I like the new direction but I wold also appreciate some form of closure to the original series, maybe in the form of flashbacks, nightmares or explanations to his girlfriend.
Amazing! I would love to have a machine like that. Can't wait to read more from this series!