All Comments on 'Aubri's First Couple Ch. 01'

More, please!

4 Stars, the pace of the story is wild, it's fast and quirky. The ending was like running full speed toward a cliff, terrified you won't stop in time. Looking forward to day two with mom's best friends Magen and Zack.

A bit more editing and it's 5.

Very fun, but there were a lot of typos. The editing/proofreading community is great on Literotica, I hope you take advantage of us.

Thank you for sharing and definitely keep writing