by Nslavemywifr
Don't let the Anons get you down. This is a very good start for a first time story.
This stupid no good worthless slut bitch whore is gonna get just what she deserves for cheating on her husband.. god I hate M/F cheaters
I lovethe way you described how Angela's outfit sits more sexy due to her extra weight, but thatwasthe lastofghevood stuff. Your 'hero', Richard, is a blacmailing selfcentered monster, with no regard for his female partner.
Although I love reading about black dicks fucking white chicks, I would appreciate the black protagonist to be more sensitive. 3*