All Comments on 'Auctioned into Slavery Pt. 02'

I liked the first chapter better. Maybe the father will see the videos and come back and love her

So obviously written by a man. Control/noncon stories are arousing because of the internal struggle. There is zero perspective here.

Also the writing is disjointed, loses its own threads and is hard to follow.

The concept has some promise but probably needs a cowriter, a woman.

@"Knew it was a dude"

Well, depends. As someone who really enjoys psychological suffering, I agree that the internal struggle plays a huge part in my enjoyment.

But some people just use it as a backdrop setting for vivid, gratuitous, abusive sexual behavior and they don't care about anything else.

I'll agree this ain't the best sex slave story out there, but all things considered, it's not too bad.

Could have been excellent. Skipped over the sex scenes. As anonymous stated, there is no internal struggle. Which is the total foundation of non consensual stories.

This is just gratitous mean, cruel, physical abuse. Being mean just to be mean.

And please get an editor.

Frivolously does NOT mean what you think it means.