All Comments on 'Auctioned into Slavery'

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CatRayCatRayover 3 years ago
Well written!

Great beginning. Curious to find out what happens next.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

please get an editor, at least really read it aloud. There are just too many errors and missed or misplaced words to make it easily readable.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

The "High-Wallers" vs "Free Spirits" vocab was a nice touch.

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An ordinary dude in real life. I love discussions about this stuff so feel free to message me or comment. I would like to say my stories are fictional, nothing that appears reflects what I do or think is right.

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