All Comments on 'Aunt Maggie and Jason Pt. 02'

by darkshark9994

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AlwaystabooAlwaystabooover 2 years ago
Salacious

Perfect paced story for two people tempted by taboo.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Good story needs follow up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Gave this a 4 Star rating despite not understanding how, while being on her front, on the towel, his cum got into her hair and on her face. Incidently, she seemed not to have had a facial as they entered the water.

You write good errotica, but please, consider the continuity of your story.

Letsplay4funLetsplay4funover 2 years ago

A very nice start to hopefully a long and happy journey and story. Looking forward to more

darkshark9994darkshark9994over 2 years agoAuthor

Hello to the Anonymous commenter; thanks for your feedback. In my mind, Aunt Maggie had her head sideways while she was lying down, so that's how her nephew was able to cum on her face, but you're right, this wasn't made clear in the text. I'll try to be more descriptive in future instalments.

Thanks again for reading and offering your thoughts. Part 3 is on its way.

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