All Comments on 'Average High School Life Ch. 12'

by Chris6160

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AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Goooood

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Now it was getting interesting! I hope to get back in the future and find more chapters 😊

NirosuNirosu3 months ago

The virus going from a 5 to 11 is something that'll need better explaining than 'tweaking some stuff'. If CC and Jay are both users they should both have ability to tweak it, that'll also need to be explained more as to why it isn't.

Also one persons sub is not another persons sub that is a big rule that it seems a lot of the dommes/doms in your story don't seem to understand which for someone not in the scene makes some sense but when in the bdsm scene that is a big no no. Like half way through they seem to half assed ask, but like that is way too late.

Glad you finally had other drugs brought in since both Amy and Jay knew about it for awhile.

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