All Comments on 'Awakened Ch. 04'

This has been my lowest-rated chapter in this series, although, in my opinion, the best-written thing I've done. Feedback would be hugely appreciated. Show me the error of my ways :D

Thank you!

Melyssa Ha

The content is wonderful, although different from a lot of people's experiences. I enjoyed it immensely. Are you looking for suggestions regarding spelling and tense?

Not sure why it scored badly, maybe some people don't like the gay/transgendered element. I've loved the four stories, as much for your writing as for the content. You write with a nice, exiting pace that make it a pleasure to read.

Thank you all for your comments. My spelling is typically atrocious, so I've added Grammarly to help in that department :-D