All Comments on 'B.D.K. Ch. 01'

That was possibly the best story I have read on this site. Fantastic! I can't wait to read more of your work.

Enjoyed the story! I can hardly wait for the next chapter. 5*

LOVED THE STORY. I love hair and your descrption of her hair and its involvement in the lovemaking was great.!!!

Or would have given the chance but not as my first one, 7" was quite enough first time by a t.v. but got me well and truely hooked and I worked my way up from there.

Looking forwards to more from you,

The best story I've read on this site in quite awhile. Can't wait for the next chapter.....

Fabulous story. I felt as if Kelly was filling my mouth with her warm cum instead of Austin's. That's how realistic the writing was. Thanks for a great contribution to Literotica.

More, more, more!

I love the detail, kelly sounds like the woman of my dreams. Looking forward to ch 2.

Wonderfully sexy fun! More please!

Great story... I was totally drawn in... so thanks and I hope I'll be seeing more of your works ;)

A great story, and really well written. Thanks for taking the time.

Hope this is the beginning of a long serie.

Please write more.

That was fucking hot!

That was HOT!!!

Wow! That was a fantastic story. Feeling incredibly horny as I read that. Very well written, exciting, and got hotter as the story went on!

Please write a "Part 2" !

Great story, read it a few times, my favourite.

God I wish I was Austin!!!

I so wish I was Austin. I would love to meet someone like Kelly.

You lost me when you mentioned the big dick. If you continue to write , grab onto a dose of reality.

If I write again, I will continue from my fantasy. If you're looking for a dose of reality, go get laid :)

Don't listen to them! Please write more in this series!

loved the story and characters I can't wait to read more about them

After reading this I could just not believe there was no chapter 2. Where's chapter 2? Please keep writing. Will be waiting for his enema and fucking.

I thought this story was great up until the point where one calls the other a "loveslut". From tender and loving equals to sexual domination ... disappointing. I mean, those stories can certainly be nice, but most of this story seemed love-oriented. The last minute change :(

Holy shit that was amazing this needs to be continued

Please, Please, Please, write another chapter or two, or more. It was the best story of it's kind I have ever read!

After reading this I could not believe there was no chapter 2 yet. Where's chapter 2? I mean cum on. Please keep writing. Will be waiting for his enema and fucking.

Part 2 please?

Great start! Would like very much to read about the enema and the hard fucking he's been promised. Promises, promises.

I must have read this story of your 50 to 100 times by now I absolutely love it I wish you would make the next one. Keep up the great work

Great story until she started her soliloquy on domination and punishment and how she was going to treat 'her lover and best friend' like shit. Bad ending.

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He should stand up, punch her in the mouth, and tell her to drag her ungrateful ass out of his bed forever. With friends like her, who needs enemies? Ruined story gets 3 stars, only because I'm feeling generous.