by Achuloh
great set up.Amazing job. I only hope this story doesn't lead to the MC being cucked.
I hope you have part 2 ready for us to read. Can't wait to find out how this turns out.
5 parts and has a decent consequences to the mindcontrol.
Could probably use more story tags to be better findable in the future if you care about reads.
since it is a repost, maybe change up the last chapter, and take it somewhere different, and you can then make it longer too!