by nested456
I like a romantic mom/daughter story, but this one wasn't it. There are so many options possible for a single or female couple could use, without using and losing the man. Fathers matter and should have a chance to be involved in this life changing decision. This felt too selfish, self centered.
Lol well I got mad at the characters and then realized, yes this is the way it has to be, it's a very unique story and will have me thinking about it quite a while. I really love your writing style, your sentences, and timeskips, just all so good.
It is a good story in a way, and it is told pretty well. But I like to hear about really hairy pussies (especially the pregnant hairy ones with thick engorged lips) having huge and oversized clits, getting licked to massively squirting orgasms over and over. This story needs to be spiced up - intensified some.