All Comments on 'Back in Uniform Pt. 02'

very nice. i do hope thought libby ends as a bisexual in an open relationship with hazel where they can both get to their bed men women and even another transgendered :P

OH MY !

The beginning was a bit confusing, so I just read past it until something made sense.

This whole story hit me like a tragedy at first. But with further reading it began to be a fun, exciting love story. The second chapter continues to provide all that the first chapter had.

Unfortunately this chapter continues to have a lot of the same errors !

The author really needs a good, slow proofreader !

I look forward to the third chapter.

5 stars keep it going love it

My thoughts on this chapter are the same as Hazels just before dinner "please! please, please keep gooooooing!!!"

Wish it was longer, can't wait for part 3

Great chapter!

5

Very well told please keep going

Great second section. Cannot wait for the next part

This chapter was good. A little mixed up at first. Maybe out line the chapter a little more and reread the story a couple of times before you post. That's how I catch many of mine. Another pair of eyes always helps too. There are tons of good people who are willing to help with editing. Looking forward to more.

I have so loved reading both parts of this more than interesting story. You have woven it so well I shall be on tender hooks till you post the next part ( please let there be a next part ) .

Please take more time in editing. There are many help tutorials available on this site for writers. Maybe one you might want to check is the one on bra sizes. The number doesn't change much except with major bodily weight gain and loss and wouldn't have anything to do with cup sizes, so the 34b to 36b joke fell flat. No pun intended. Also, there is too many paragraph breaks and sometimes too much unnecessary details.

All in all, it is a good story line and I will continue to read through the chapters

I am loving the development of the relationship. It's a good story. the editing needs some work. Using the character's name on every line is not great. Please keep going. Practice makes perfect <3

This is great!!! Kinda inspiring me to come out. Lovely writing btw