All Comments on 'Baron of Hell'

So there grammatical errors in the story but i absolutely love the story and setting!! Cant wait to see more of this Demon horsecock daddy give it to his new femboy sissy!

Oh yes please continue. Don’t care about the random typos. Can get past them no problem.

Thank you so much To the both of you!! So I guess yall liked it enough for me to clean up the rest and post it?

Loved the story but the grammar was terrible, you may want to proof read the story next time.

Lmao!! Paddles I love the honesty :D and I really mean that with no sarcasm! I really appreciate the real feed back.

And yes my grammar is completely atrocious. Iam just glad you still liked it.

Though iam an impatient person so when I go through fixing the gramer of my old stories, I usually end up being like. (eh fuck it! they will get the idea.) Lmao. Probably not a good habit of mine. :p

So looking back again I see that words aren’t misspelled, just wrong for the context. So a run through a spellcheck might not help. Putting it through a grammar checker ( like in Word) might help. But if the rest is like this I can deal with it. I just want this to continue. Looking forward to the next part.

Thanks! ill do my best to make it better the next time. Iam happy to hear that you want me to continue. And yea I did use Microsoft Mord. But sometimes it's a little finicky when finding errors. Lol.

So glad you're back! I must agree with the others, that the spelling and punctuation are annoying but the story very exciting. And I think you handled some things like exposition well too, like having the horse-demon talk about the main character's life rather than starting with an explanation of it. Now I'm eager for more demonic visions from you! (Quite literally visions in the case of this story)

Oh wow thank you! :) that's so awesome to hear!!

I hope you like what else I have written for this story! Iam happy to hear that so many of you like the stories I write. Yall have no idea how refreshing that is for me. And yes, I am happy to hear the hard criticism too. :p

Good enough to ignore the typos. Really enjoyed reading this.

Can't wait for the next part. Keep them cumming;) can deal with typos, just need more of this debauchery

Get a spell check program, get real, and get help.

I would like to see more of this.