All Comments on 'BBQ Shenanigans'

by Slightlyracy

Sort by:
  • 6 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

really enjoyed the story line, you intrigued us as you built up to the final get together as a group. well done.

kiwianne12kiwianne12almost 3 years ago

Great story! Had me wondering where it was going. With the COVID thing I couldn't imagine they'd all be fucking but in some ways this was even better.

I showed this story to my parents. They are both 66. He said "Where do we sign up!" Mum just gave a little smile, slightly embarrassed, slightly sexy.

My partner was teasing me later asking, "What have you started now, Anne. But you all know I was innocent. If my parents want to get horny over a story, can I be blamed for that?

Anne.

Silenus636Silenus636almost 3 years ago

Well done! Besides being an enjoyable read, I'm anxious to see what else might appear next.

AtrampboyAtrampboyover 2 years ago

Loved it! Well told and great group of characters, I wish I were in their circle

Westman99Westman99over 1 year ago

Another really nice story. I practice naturism but on my own nowadays. It would be enjoyable to be in a situation for this to happen irl.

A.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great story, and very erotic. A few errors which jarred on reading. It’s a ‘chaise longue’ not ‘chaise lounge’, one labium, two labia, and one areola two areolae, though you often find ‘areolas’ now.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous