All Comments on 'Be a Good Girl for Daddy'

Premise with possibilities.

Boring.

Two stars.

Ignore the haters. This is a good start.

I'm sure with some more backstory (as you've already mentioned you haven't written yet) this would be an amazing book! Lots of promise!

Its good - you may need to clarify though if it's Ddlg or not but it's a good start

Post part 2

I liked it, and would like to see you continue.

Wow the haters are on parade today... I'm interested in seeing where it goes. I think it's a great 1st effort even if all the elements aren't my personal preference but I'll still read part 2. 😊 It's a good premise, your grammar and word usage thus far are good. Keep going fuck the douche canoes

Filthy and wonderful. One of the better new stories I have read.

I liked it!

I REALLY liked it! It has definite possibilities. I wanted more 🤷‍♀️

>no period due to "running"

>no curves due to "running"

>hairless vagina due to "running"

>literal incest

>"little girl" and "little pussy"

this is literally a pedo fantasy

It doesn't seem like this is written about an 18 year old. Too many "coincidences". Creepy.

is there more coming?

Wish story hadn’t ended like that. Absolutely love the idea of her maybe not being 18 yet.