All Comments on 'Be Careful What You Wish For Ch. 01'

Well that sure ramped up super quickly. Not necessarily bad, but definitely jarring. I am interested in where it goes next though.

He assaults and has his wife raped? What the fuck is wrong with you?

Seriously? What in the ever living fuck is wrong with you?

Were you dropped on your head as a child or are you naturally stupid?

I was going to be nice, since this is your first attempt; but after reading this excrement, I want you to log out of your computer and take a hammer to it and never write another goddamn word you half witted, knuckle dragging, mouth breathing, Democrat voting moron.

If you think you should write anything, take your head and smash it into a wall until the desire to write goes away.

Repeat as necessary.

Welcome to cuck World.

Another wimp man.

Just a piece of racist crap.

what a big asshole. it is well done for his face to this asshole.

'Be careful what you wish for ........

you just might get it '........

(and it might be more than you can handle) .....

Good writing skills, but who the hell got any pleasure out of reading or writing such a hate story?

He deserves jail time as well.

This was a train wreck. You need an editor. And the story made very little sense.

OK, so that was weird. She is not upset that she willingly walked up to the guy to give him head and it read like she enjoyed the sex with some of the others but once she heard her husband did Monica she now decides to leave him?

Both are losers so gig deal. He needs to do the financial crap so they can both screw who they want but on their own dime.

Haha he got what he deserved

You started posting three years ago. And have posted a number of mediocre stories. If this was the very first story you started and you haven't finished it yet, what makes you think you'll EVER finish it? And as a reader, why would I want to start a story that has little chance of ending? Dumb.

1 star

Hard to believe a man with your published bookshelf would post this. Sorry, but it reads like it was written by a couple of horny teenagers swapping lies and trying to outdo each other. YOU DO HAVE AN IMPRESSIVE LIST OF PUBLISHED STORIES HERE ON LITEROTICA.

Anyway, good Luck and thanks for the effort. cd

Well this steamer of a pile insults black and white people, portraying yhem as mindless breeders.... 5minutes i cant retrieve

The best thing about this abortion is her walking away.

The rest.....JFC is was not good.

Good read but not a very convincing story line.

Loved every word of this well crafted and very exciting story!

One of the worst stories I've read on Lit. The author is a pig!

A racist story that is apparently meant for idiots! Who has their wife raped? Only idiots!

If minus were possible it would be -5 * !!!

Rod is wishing he could write a story that isn’t recognized as an absolute joke. This is awful, even when judged by the author’s previous work.

Rod, is no doubt, laughing his ass off. All of you trolls missed the whole point of this story. It is a fuck story. Pure stroke material. Some commenters repeatedly read this author just to slam his work. Why? If you don’t like it don’t read it. I liked it. A fun read.

That may have been the stupidest thing i have everread

'''''I walk over to them unzip and pull out my hard member and cream on both Marie and Monica. I built up a load of semen''''' Within 2 sentences you have erred in the use of tenses. Did nobody edit this for you? 4*s earned for your effort. Thanks for the read.

I guess he got what he wanted!

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