by gracethebitch
utter crap, and unfortunately it is an aussie writing (and I use the term writing with regret) this pure dribble
Just stumbled on this and wish I had kept walking.
BDSM it certainly ain't.
An " I hate men diatribe " it certainly is.
No objection to you wanting to air your feelings, but please remember this site is litEROTICA..not litERANTIA....
You can just hear the screams of rage if a man carved his name into a woman's breasts..and rightly so....so I wonder what everyone will make of this.
Hey ho....
You posted two chapters quickly, so perhaps you have this all written. You have now gotten a strong response on the first two chapters. While there is an audience for this type of story, it is not here. Fetish is a much better fit, as the gloves can all come off over there.
Everyone's view of the world of bdsm is individual. However, I think a significant portion of people would agree this is a horse of a different color, and that is base, crass abuse.
Also, you might consider editing your profile, unless you are actually into 'findom.'
We came on here to read something to spice us up some. If this is an example of what we will find on here I would rather look elsewhere.
Hmm.
Well, I can see everyone's point. I actually originally wrote this specifically for one of my submissives who is very much into torture, abuse, humiliation, feet and toilet slavery. He LOVED it, by the way.
I have since learned, from reading these comments and some other stories on this site, that what I wrote IS indeed crass porn, and not proper erotica. Apologies for that.
I am certainly NOT a man hater by any means. None of the things in my story are even REMOTELY what I would EVER be into.
Again, it was written FOR someone. I am aware most people (both men and women) would definitely not find this a turn on.
wow... i would love to be treated like that for a few days.... had almost everything i that turns me on!
Lucky man!! So fucking sexy finding sick and twisted sexual woman.
I would love a woman to treat me like that