All Comments on 'Be Careful What You Wish For Pt. 05'

How is any woman going to orgasm when they’re in pain?

Take your head, ram it into wall until you orgasm. Repeat as necessary.

Fucking moron.

I find myself with mixed feelings regarding this story. On the one hand it's well written, interesting with a decent plot. The narrative is good and well described, and even though I find pet play a little silly and unerotic it all comes across as pretty hot. It could be due to the non consent aspect, which is a personal like of mine. But, it's also part of what I don't like here.

The Master is suitably evil, the physical torment and punishments match the theme, but its the mental abuse which I personally find disturbing. Forcing a submissive to live as a pet puppy is one thing, but driving a slave to attempt suicide is a different matter altogether. At the moment there seems to be nothing but a future of continued suffering and brain washing for Butta and Slave, Baby girl I'm not sure about. So maybe a hint of a chance of escape, or a chink of light for freedom might be in order?

Of course these are just my thoughts, the author must decide what happens, but it does seem to be heading into a dark place.

The pet play part of the story was done well.