All Comments on 'Beamed Up Pt. 02'

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Demaris7Demaris7about 1 year ago

I loved this story and I am anxious to see more. I would appreciate longer chapters though. I am ready to really get into the story. Great Job!

Story_Before_SexStory_Before_Sexabout 1 year ago

That escalated quickly. Thuul lusted for Lizzie after a single look and masterbated to her within half an hour. Somebody was horny.

UserOfFleshUserOfFlesh12 months ago

I like this story concept. ....But I dont understand how to Thuul is so powerful. But needs privacy to masturbate. I hope this gets explained later. I am excited to see more updates to this story.

I am excited to see what happens with "Consequences are not limited to individuals, and may be visited upon the entire social unit." But this story is like 3 out of 5 right now for me.

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