All Comments on 'Bear and Bare Pt. 01'

Dreadful punctuation!!

You have a good story here, but the lack of editing makes for bumpy and confusing reading. Hope you will repair it and continue to provide a solid story we can all love!

Putting the punctuation aside I thought it delightful, thank you. I am looking forward to the next chapter with anticipation, just my kind of bear.

Sequel please!!!

Agree with the above comments, but most importantly a hot fantasy. I can’t wait to see Zeke’s dad get some play time as well!

Maybe I am a foreigner, I don't face any trouble into reading.