All Comments on 'Bear Lake Summer Camp Ch. 05: Finale'

realy did not like the ending.. you were doing so well why you went the way you did for the end .was a real let down. o well you are the writer i am just a reader.

Great story (even though somewhat borrowed) with a good rollercoaster mix of emotions, but there's a few things left hanging, especially at the end. Guessing that with a little effort you could add a few more chapters covering the friends left at the party, what happens to Donny, maybe a brief history of that "bad cop" where they might have been trying to dig up stuff on him anyway... and perhaps a cure for that lost ability to climax! Maybe blackmailing the stepdad into buying the camp and opening it again is the magic cure? (purging the demons from the place?)