All Comments on 'Bear Lake Summer Camp Ch. 05: Finale'

Great story (even though somewhat borrowed) with a good rollercoaster mix of emotions, but there's a few things left hanging, especially at the end. Guessing that with a little effort you could add a few more chapters covering the friends left at the party, what happens to Donny, maybe a brief history of that "bad cop" where they might have been trying to dig up stuff on him anyway... and perhaps a cure for that lost ability to climax! Maybe blackmailing the stepdad into buying the camp and opening it again is the magic cure? (purging the demons from the place?)

realy did not like the ending.. you were doing so well why you went the way you did for the end .was a real let down. o well you are the writer i am just a reader.