All Comments on 'Became Slave to My Indian Maid Ch. 02'

Longer please, maybe some cfnm.

Your narration is boring there is no domination. Entire story is revolving around massaging legs. You are spending more time on details of objects which are not necessary. Introduce categories like CFNM, chastity, humiliation, Tease and denial, CBT, Corporal punishments, Double domination, Body worship, Pegging, Sissification. I expected a lot from you because i am also Telugu, but you are not writing upto the mark.

Very nice post. Please write long post.

Please write longer and more

I’m eager to read

Don't focus on negative comments

Your story is very good. It's in process of building the plot.

Yeah, some people read stories while holding their dick in hands to masturbate, so just make it longer. You can finish the story in 5 parts or in 5 pages, it's your choice but 5 pages makes readers stick to your story and waiting for another one.

Good luck with writing

Hope to read another chapter in few (2-3) days

Longer definatly, chastity and cfnm good story

Hi Bro, great story I speak telugu too and was imagining how this would be if telugu words were there, the native touch would really awesome and increase the feel. Please add some here and there if possible. Anyway, love your work!

Great going mate .. make it long and detailed which feels more realistic. Include all aspects of slavery from feet to armpit to sweat to spit then pussy ass lick then pissing , cuckold , shit etc. U can make parts on each on of them. And use them simultaneously in next part. Make it holistic..

Don't take this much gap between stories otherwise readers will loose connect.

very good story, please continue

Egarly waiting for next, please post asap

Next part please

How much others say that "the narration is long and boring", you should not mind them at all. You have really set up the story & it's characters really well. Unlike other stories, where domination stuff starts up pretty much in an instant, the amount of character build you have done is insanely good.

Also, the way you set up this whole "water not available till morning" as soon as they both entered the maids house so that in future chapters you can use her "used and dirty water" in story was a really smart thing.

My personal favorite moment was when she commanded him that the foot massage shouldn't stop even though the son was on call with her mom. It's like the maid commanded "I don't care who the fuck are you on call with, your hands are just the tools for my worship, wo don't you fucking stop", lol. Honestly hoped more small-small hints of control like these in future chapters as well ;)

Sad that you weren't able to continue this masterpiece of yours in such a long time. Still eagerly waiting for the next chapter. :)

I really love this.The way you describe is really outstanding.I like slow story always.pls continue

Next part plssssss

awaiting for the next chapters...

Common Bro continue pllz

Bro plzz continue bro

Please continue the series.

Please publish the next chapters ASAP

Any update about the next part?

Next part date?

Next?

Please post the next part soon

There is something special about it can you please continue

Pls continue... Next part

Long part wanted