by FlannaFionaFlaherty
Only a hint of true romance, let's see if you can delve into their future relationship as well as you can write sex scenes... 4.3*
Insatiable couple just couldn't get enough! How can he cum so much and still keep on pleasuring her?
So freaking hot!
The best chapter yet in this truly compelling romantic drama! The loves scene interweave perfectly with the plot, and the result is great read from start to finish.
What a time David and Becky had a true romp and for the first time fuck one great sexual roll in the hay. Good story and good writing a true 4 star story almost a 5 Thanks again for your work.
Excellent story very erotic and beautiful romantic sexual scenes loved reading it. Memories of youth past since approaching my seventies. Love the writing, look forward to more chapters as Becky and David develop their relationship.