All Comments on 'Becky's Tease Ch. 04'

I love this story. Thanks so much for sharing it. It tickles a number of my fetishes. :) I haven't read Chapters 1-3, but I'll be doing so shortly. Well done! <3

Wonderful story. Becky is so deliciously cruel. She rules Barry in every way possible!

Looking forward to the fun Becky is hopefully about to have at his expense. I hope she rocks his world and takes him WAY PASS his limits. Rock it on. Thanks for your time to write these stories. Cheers

The whole Becky series are superbly written,full of erotic tension,the punishment sequence,prison rations and lock up,especially so.I would have Barry dressed as a serving and kitchen maid,on weekends ,not wearing fetish dress,but humiliated in maids dress apron and cap.

,Great writing.

Nancy LaBonne

I loved this story right up to the fabulous ending. It is a well written story by a great writer. Kudos to Toastywarm01. All of her works are worth reading. I hope she continues to write her stories here.

The interplay with Mary joining Becky is the punishment in this chapter is intoxicating. And the total submission of Barry, a beautiful end to a love story from a different point of view.

The Epilog didnt save it and to involve kids is simply disgusting. Shame on Becky, she is an evil charakter that can not be trusted.

Loved this series. I wanted to read the whole thing before commenting, so forgive me if this rambles.

First of all, your writing is informal & playful, which expresses Becky wonderfully. When she turned that quality to dominating her man, it was fun watching her change, over the chapters, become more & more sure of herself.

Change, as in character growth, is the heart of storytelling; in B's case, nicely portrayed.

But so is *conflict. So.it occurred to me to be a little bothered that Barry became a bit of a doormat, whined a little, but went along with each new rung on the submission ladder (as in, no conflict)...BUT, watching Becky grow into her dominance, which was *hot, as were the sex scenes, made me put that aside.

Still, for that reason, I have to admit I enjoyed Ch 1 the best. Barry's surprise along with Becky's sort of uncertain grasp of her control at first, that was the hottest thing.

Also, the way she took his penis-centric porn-influenced expectations and bent them to HER will! That was the best.

(Also, I'm a fan of panty-gagging, so there's was that 😈)

I'm going to read more, TW. Thanks for the ride.

Girl power, sister! Girls rule.

Cheers, Emm

Loved the series. Thanks 😊