All Comments on 'Becoming a Sexier Wife Ch. 02'

Lacks the sparkle of part 1. This was inevitable I suppose, but not as much fun as the intimacy in part 1.

...where it all falls apart???

I thought this was going to be a story where a loivng couple discovered ways to improve their love making WITHOUT resorting to swinging, cheating, and denegrating their partnership. Oh, well. People who have a need to read this swill will be happy. Those who like real love should just read the first story. Too bad you were not creative enough to come up with ways they cold enhance their love with each other without turning to the the cliches of loveless, selfish wives.

Every mans dream? So the great unwashed would have us believe. In reality another marriage changes direction and is forever tainted. As stated by others chapter 1 was fun, flirty and sexy. Chapter 2 is predictable, boring and very unsexy. Of course the cucks and swingers and whores will vote 5 stars and cry about the readers that don't like such stories being so vocal and why are they reading a story on this site( they always say that don't they?)and go read a bible. I would advise readers to glance through the writers other stories to understand his/her agenda. In this case the promotion and selling of a swinging/sharing/open marriage/cuckold lifestyle if that is not your idea of good read or turn on do not read this story.

How long will we have to wait for this tremendously sensual story to have more parts, love it keep it coming!

Fantastic