All Comments on 'Becoming Free Use Ch. 05'

So fucking hot! Can't wait to see what happens next! Five stars and a favorite point!

Got this old guy's motor started!

OG

As long as it's just Mary and Jacob, the story is fine. But once you get the mom and dad involved, forget it. Way to destroy a great bro/sis story. More ISN'T always better.

This just keeps getting better and better! Don't listen to the naysayers. I'm hoping for a full family fuck-fest... part of me even kinda hopes they'll go behind each other's backs... but I doubt that you'd go that route given all that you've written so far. Still... I wouldn't mind that one bit! :) Kudos on some good storytelling here!

Mary and Jacob yes…parents involved NO!!!! Ruins the whole story. Why can’t these stories ever just stay with the siblings.? They always have to be ruined by getting a parent(s) or someone else involved. Just makes for a sad ending.