All Comments on 'Becoming Free Use Ch. 06'

Not a fan of parental involvement in a sibling affair or romance.

Give dad the mother/daughter treatment.

I AM loving the parental involvement. Really looking forward to the next chapter. looking forward to family fucking! :)

Parents should NOT get involved whatsoever! This should only be between the brother and sister. Thanks for ruining what started out as a great story but now isn't worth the time. 1*

If the women are on birth control, what's with condoms?

This is your story, write it the way you see it. Once we accept the original premise there is a natural flow of children to parents.

Let he games continue.

I knew you'd ruin a beautiful story by involving the parents. hate it.

Why do writers always try to make it seem like it's going to be a story about siblings and then feel the need to ruin it with parents, friends etc. Just wish it would have been a happy ending. I definitely won't be reads any more of your stories.

Ah, dang, the dad only does straight stuff? Oh well. Keep up the good work!

Anonymous commenting is not helpful since I cannot address you personally. When I craft a story, the overall plot is known to me before I even start. I never MADE this story seem to be anything more than what it was, each chapter at a time. I prefer to release a chapter at a time and with that, I have to use tags for that chapter less I draw people to it who are hoping for content that is not there.

This story just became shit.