All Comments on 'Becoming His Ch. 13'

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ShadowRosie over 4 years ago

Where is the ending?

This went no where fast.

mrdomdavis over 4 years agoAuthor

It's in Part 2 ShadowRosie

Maybe I should've combined the 2 chapters into one long chapter. I like the idea of leaving her in suspense between chapters though. https://www.literotica.com/s/becoming-his-ch-14

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