All Comments on 'Becoming His Toy'

It was very descriptive which I like. Plenty of detail.

That's perfect. Just ended too soon.

Amazing ..really makes you feel wet !

I like it and its got me wet

I like when the way of he talks to her

transps, you shared a really well written short story - Thank You! I enjoyed the read. While not my favorite topic, you set the tone and did not confuse the reader with poor grammar or word choice. Congratulations on great writing and careful editing.

I'm sorry to note that you have not submitted additional stories. As a first, this is well above grade.

Keep 'em comin'!

You can say “woman”. Jfc it doesn’t make you a transaphobe

I wish there was a part 2!