All Comments on 'Becoming Miss Lucy's Prisoner'

Nothing special. Not erotic. Needed to have some indication of the future treatment #24 would experience. Waste of time to read this scene

I'd have told her to fuck off as soon as she knee'd me in the balls, stupid bitch.

nice work i like it and can't wait to see what else she does to him

your story and writing is good please continue it

also to the people complaining in the comments

this is a femdom story do you know what the word femdom means. It means female domination

if you don't like girls hurting males why are you reading a femdom/female domination story idiot

some people in the comments are so stupid they read a femdom story and then complain that it has femdom

Well, kind of nice beginning. Please work on grammar and misspellings. It should be 'faint' instead of 'feint', and 'spraying' verses 'spaying'. Hope that there are going to be many chapters?