by musclesports
Great beginning for a really hot story! Very good writing and very visual. Definitely boner material. Thank you
Nice start for this hot story, I like the individual narratives. I also like the idea of the cocky Eric being put in his place by a true alpha male. Looking forward to reading Eric's and Thomas' narratives as well. Thanks for a good beginning. Yours sincerely, MLF
Well I can’t wait to see how this story plays out!!! I am really liking the different pov’s. Keep the boner material coming please…lol