All Comments on 'Bee's Story, My Story Ch. 03'

Please continue!!

With no indication of having recently given birth . . .

Sort of feel lost . . .

Did give you a three ( 3 ) , but now wonder why?

Brilliant! very much enjoy your style of writing, very realistic.

4/5

I don't want to sound patronizing, but I'm actually surprised how much I'm enjoying this! Whether the story is real or not is irrelevent; it FEELS real, and I love that. Your narration is so fluid, a kind of day-in-the-life progression that I'm really digging. I look forward to the rest of the tale. Keep up the good work!

the boy is ok good