All Comments on 'Beginnings Ch. 03'

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SilntbtdedlySilntbtdedly10 months ago

This started so good and then u ruined by introducing a Beth type character ugggg done with this story..

EricaDoesNowEricaDoesNow10 months agoAuthor

I really think you should keep reading, it goes through twists you may appreciate.

Jake047Jake04710 months ago

Beth was such an unnecessary character here.

Raquels_PantiesRaquels_Panties9 months ago

I dunno. I like Beth. I think she cares about Valerie.

Chapters are still too short. 🙂

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