All Comments on 'Behind Closed Doors Ch. 03'

There is something about the way you describe the textbook mentality that some of these men have so perfectly, and the intricacies of dealing with the mind vs. body during abuse, that was too close to home for me personally to enjoy as erotica, yet - I still had to finish the story. Well written, unnervingly, captivating. The characters were real. The way the characters are complex but the story is still a decent pace. You made it so real. It id a dark piece, but a good one. Please keep writing.

Strangely exciting... I have to say you probably nailed it with the perp. Personally I very much like the suggestion of a close friend to a girls dad who oversteps the line. She seems to be trapped between desperately holding on to her self respect in the eyes of others and the natural curiosity of a young woman.

The guy is a bit too fast for my taste, he doesn't even see her and therefore doesn't really connect. But I still like the storyline

Will there be a chapter 4, possibly where he takes her in all three holes and/or where she becomes more willing because her resistance is worn down?

I would love for her to find out in chapter 4 that she is pregnant. Her dad throws her out, so she has no where else to go. Keith takes her in on the condition she marries him.

OH NOOOO!!!!! Dammit! That poor girl is just too naive. Hell, me too, lol. Of course it wasn't a real Plan B pill! Dang!

this is so mf hot oh my god i want this to be me !!!