All Comments on 'Behind Closed Doors Ch. 04'

Excellent story. Definitely one of the best on here right now. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Enjoying this so much, especially with the appearance of Melissa, can't wait to see what happens next, great stuff

I hope he gets what coming to him in the end. I like that she realizes he is a pig and that she has more power than she thought. He wouldn’t know what love was if it smacked him in the face. I wish her father had been more protective and punched him in the face. I know this is his fantasy but biting his member nearly off mine. Good writing and the sex is hot even though disturbing.

This is so hot, would love to see both girls submit to him and be owned by him

Absolutely incredible story telling. This is erotic fiction of an incredibly high calibre. If there is any writer on this site who is better,I have yet to read their work.

This was an amazing story I was pretty much just reading it for the plot so great

Up to now the story is developing well. He keeps using Lucy taking advantage of her extremely submissive personality.

I wish she helps to teach a really very, very reluctant Melissa all the tricks in hopes of her fruend taking her place as Keith fuck toy.

Wow all the parts of this story are hot you're a very talented writer!

Love it! Cant wait for psrt 5

Damn you’re good can’t wait until part 5

This is so good, I'm hooked

Holy Shit. Just when I think this guy can't get any more depraved!

Really hot stuff. Like it how you let herbe reluctant. Great series!