All Comments on 'Ben & the Enlarging Ch. 08'

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Anonymousover 2 years ago

you left us hanging beth the twins and what was the full circle about the teacher came out of no where terrible ending

Eloquentman over 2 years agoAuthor

I’ll apologise now for not completing this, but real life has demanded my attention of late and there has been very little time to write. I promise at least one more chapter in this story,, and I will get to it as soon as I can.

Anonymousover 2 years ago

over all i loved it but the ending was lacking the twins didnt get theres and the head chearleader didnt get hers either

Eloquentman over 2 years agoAuthor

All in good time. Please have a peek at my profile for an explanation of the delays

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