All Comments on 'Best of Both Men'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
JEALOUS OF BERT

I often wonder where the women are that understand how much men desire their approval. Even to the extent of submitting to and serving them as a naked (and therefore vulnerable) play thing. Providing oral pleasure without hope of reciprocation and receiving manual simulation occasionally and solely for her amusement complete the submission. The faux-incestuous slant heightens danger but provides the door through which the relationship begins. Thank-you for this peak at femdom!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Very Hot Story !!!!!!!!

Chatbug you are to be commended on your fantastic method of introducing sensational femdom: so natural and believable. Just a shame that being such a natural domme, Erin didn't force some serious degrading ass worship as well. Hope you write some further escapades in the lives of Erin and Bert. 99/100

snathsnathover 13 years ago
nice one

it is a good story. Howevr, the denial is more, reward is less. Try to balance it. Reward after denial is very sweet and is an expected attribute of a good, caring mistress.

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I have written several pornographic / erotic stories, and I'm trying to improve my writing skills. I write stories that I'm interested in, and I try to add humor and personality to the stories. Almost all of my stories are about female domination. A few of my stories are ab...