All Comments on 'Best of Show'

by Nakedcraving

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PiusPaulPiusPaulabout 1 month ago

I liked the story but it definitely needs one more chapter to be complete

AmbulAmbulabout 1 month ago

I agree; it seem rushed and too short to make it a real story about the husband and wife and their porn collection and her role as a whore/porn actress at the show.

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Taught School for 45 years. Wrote books on nudism and body acceptance. Have biked the coast of California. Live naked as often as possible. Write as hobby. I am a baseball poet. I get a hit about a third of the time, then I am doing well. If I hit it out of the park eve...