All Comments on 'Beth Phoenix: How it all Began'

Honestly it wasn't your best. Definitely like to see more of Nikki taking Beth's Ass. Let Beth totally submit to Nikki, just them two one one one. Beth was so dominate, but the tables have turned first AJ Lee conquered that ass. Now it's on to Nikki taking advantage of Beth's needs of getting her own ass fucked. Nikki passes Beth ass down the line to the likes of Melina, Maryse, Trish, Carmella, Sasha, Charlotte, you get the general idea.

Yeah this was sort of a prequel and i was scared of this being too risky, still thanks for the advice. I am confused about should the next chapter include beth with Aj and Kaitlyn or have her go a road of total downfall by submitting to the likes of kelly kelly and alicia fox who were her bitches once. Will have to wait for the next on this.

The next chapter, should have Beth totally bottom for Nikki. Beth should be worshipping Nikki's boobs & ASS. Nikki needs to stretch out Beth's fat ass and make it hers. And if Nikki really wants to make AJ Lee mad, Nikki needs to fuck Kaitlyn ! You can multiple ways in either direction ! Mayb Kaitlyn catches Nikki fucking Beth, & decides she wants Nikki for herself, cauz AJ Lee won't fuck her ASS anymore. Whatever you decide, but I definitely would had alot of dirty talk between Nikki/ Beth even more so Nikki/ Kaitlyn.

I wanna ask if you could devote a hot/ sexy , dirty talk, ass fucking story with Natayla / Beth. Whom would bottom for the other Natayla or Beth ?

That is hot, I think i need a chapter before i make NIkki target Aj in any way but a direct Nikki/Beth story might work.

I'm actually working on a trish/victoria story right now, will come back to this series in a while

Any chance Brie fucks her sisters ASS Nikki ! Furthermore Brie goes and fucks AJ LEE'S ASS ! Or have AJ Lee fuck Brie's ASS to get back at Nikki !

I personally see NIkki as the aggressive bella and thus would envision her destroying Aj lee eventually

You got something good here. You mention Nikki topping Kaitlyn . Nikki needs Kaitlyn for herself to fuck & dominate her ASS. Kaitlyn worships Nikki's big boobs , & gives up her ASS to Nikki. But wait Beth wants to be in the room to watch Nikki fuck that ASS, then join in. And guess who's looking on as the three-way goes on ??.......Eve Torres ( who has had a crush on Beth/Nikki !!

That is a such a good idea, i don;t know about Eve's part but I envision Nikki tormenting Beth by fucking Kaitlyn in front of her and it can lead to how aj was losing all the control over her bitches

Any plans on having that idea that I gave you to have Nikki fuck Kaitlyn's ASS. definitely would have to come up with a plot scenario where Nikki gets Kaitlyn' ASS, maybe a winner take all match.... hopefully we'll see an Nikki / Kaitlyn story, with Kaitlyn's ASS & BOOBS belong to NIKKI BELLA

That's good piece of info, meaning AJ losing control of her bitches, with Nikki waiting to fuck ALL of AJ' s BITCHES ASSES.

My plan as of right now is to do one chapter of Nikki and Beth and then transform Nikki into a top that hunts Aj lee's title as alpha. So yes Nikki and Kaitlyn would totally be a chapter at some point in future. I'm just not confident about my writing at this point and thus i take time to write these stories so you gonna have to wait for a few months for this

Honestly don't doubt yourself in your writing skills. You have got some really good stories & ideas will come more & more you write. You know what you wanna do, and have it planned all in your head, and writing whomever ever you choose it will make I'm sure good stories. I do hope you create a story with Charlotte's getting fucked by women with so many different scenarios whether their past / present divas. Definitely hope to have Charlotte moan & groan getting her asked by the likes of Sasha Banks, Bailey, Carmella, Natayla, Dana Brooke etc ...etc ..

Hey thank you for the comment. charlotte is someone that i also see as a bottom. I would totally see her as a bottom, you can check out pdwriter72 stories on archieve of our own foroum, he has something great there going on.

Charlotte vs Sasha is something i would love to explore in the future personally

this pdwriter 72 associated on Literotica site ? Basically how do I find their stories ?

You can type "pdwriter72 archieve of our own" on google and he will show up. The series is called queen of bottoming

I did locate that and was able to see multiple stories according to that writer. that story actually was pretty good and very much long. Hope to see more stories of Charlotte bottoming for other women. Basically wanna see her get fucked multiple times by Sasha Banks, Lacey Evans, Dana Brooke, Carmella & even Asuka ! And Trish Stratus gets that ASS to fuck night after night.

Yeah man, that's hot, i have a half written charlotte story too, in which bayley turns the table with charlotte, but it's just hard to complete

This is some hot stuff, when's the next part coming up

Pretty soon, probably by mid august

Great story! A big part of me wishes Beth stayed with Natalya and let her take her ass