All Comments on 'Betrayed and Enslaved Ch. 05'

I'm sitting here writing this while tearing up. I knew this wasn't going to turn out well, but I still wasn't prepared for this much happening to Brandon. So now he gets to sleep in a bed instead of a dog cage, doesn't Joe treat his slave well. And all Brandon had to do to receive this special favor was get burned, beaten and drink what was probably over a gallon of the three men's bodily fluids. Thank God they didn't have to take a dump. But quite frankly, at this point in the story I don't think anything would shock me. As I said before, this is very well written, that and the need to see retribution are the reasons I still here reading. I really hope that you're not going to end this story with Brandon satisfied and happily excepting his new life as Joe's slave. Chapter #5 once again gets ***** for the great writing. MLF

I think you need to expand your imagination. How about body modification? Genderbending? Male lactation or pregnancy? Maybe Joe can turn the slave into a new species.

Pooh Adam. And Bruce stupping out that cigarette….

A lot of pain but the slave will learn.