All Comments on 'Beverly Hills 9021-hoe - CNC'

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AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

I loved the dirty sluttiness of the story, and hope she returns for an even dirtier encore. On the negative side, you should really do more grammar and spelling checks. At times the story is confusing and hard to read because of them. Example: hungry ness should be hungriness. At least for me, they cause my mind to pause to correct the error. These types of errors run through the story. But, it is exceedingly hot, and I love the druggie behavior.

lillyjones1402lillyjones14024 months ago

Awesome!!! Well written.

You need to write more !!

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