All Comments on 'Bewitched By Two Sisters Pt. 01'

Great part 1! Loved it!

As with your earlier story, "two sisters", you referred to "Austria" instead of "Australia" in "bewitched". I hope you understand that Austria is on the other side of the world for an Australian. I sense you need an edittor...

Enjoyable story with a lot of potential. The need for some good editing distracts quite a bit. Despite your warning about length, I would've gladly read another page of content that would allow you to build up the tension more and elaborate more on appearances, places, sounds, etc. Thanks for the story, and please keep on writing!

@anonymous. He said he grew up in Austria and left for Australia at 19. Don't think there is any confusion except on you part? Yes, unfortunately similar names.