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All Comments on 'Beyond Bargained For'

by crimsonslave

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Nice Beginning

You've got me hooked!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
oh --- more please

I'm hooked too - way way too short. I was looking for a part 2 or a page 2,3,.. Very good start

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

You're teasing us as badly as Mathew is teasing Iva. I'm hooked too.

Scorpio44Scorpio44almost 13 years ago
You put it in Novels and Novellas.

And it has 1 page. I must admit I'm disappointed. The writing is good, the tease is perfection, and given the response of Anon. effective. My only complaint, it's too short for my tastes.

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