All Comments on 'Big in Japan Ch. 03'
by WifeWatchman
- 11 Comments
WifeWatchmanalmost 3 years agoAuthorThe next chapter of the story has been submitted, and hopefully will be published soon.
drycreeksalmost 3 years agoGosh just when i thought u couldnt get any better. Job well done. Cant wait for the finale!!!!
Anonymousalmost 3 years agoDear WW,
I'm re-reading the Iron Crowbar saga from the beginning.
I found, perhaps, something is wrong.
"Teresa's Christmas Story"
Part 5 - The Truth Revealed
....My father was committed to Shady Acres-- that's the mental institution there.
....My mother's sister, who my father hated and I never saw, claimed me and I lived with her and her husband until I went to college. Their last name was 'Croyle', and I just used that name
"Sugar and spice"
Part 3 - Cajun Country
....My mother's parents were Charles and Clara Belvedere....
...Clarissa, the oldest, who we're going to visit now; Dora Clara, the middle child; and Sarah Lenora, who eloped with an Army Officer that served in combat in Viet Nam."---
...Dora Clara married a man named Edward Bessemer....
...Clarissa, the oldest child,...married a man named Esterson....
I don't see any Croyle in Teresa's mother's family ....
...My aunt on my father's side was named Beatrice." said Teresa. "She took care of me after my father... was unable to....
Am I wrong or is there a mistake in the story?
WifeWatchmanalmost 3 years agoAuthorThat was explained in "Sugar and Spice". Teenager Teresa thought (was told?) the aunt she went to live with was her mother's sister, but later learned that that aunt was her father's sister.
pk2curiousalmost 3 years agoOn of the best and longest chapters in a while . With the very interesting trip to Japan . To this compelling trial ......... And the verdict Is .........?
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