All Comments on 'Bikes Ch. 01'

by VoyagerWy

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AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Great story! We need to know what else is in your mind

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

OK premise.

But when sex started it was almost zipped through.

Needed much more in the way of preliminaries/foreplay/exploration/teasing.

Three stars.

LucieLou007LucieLou0079 months ago

Hot story, well done :D

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