All Comments on 'Birthday Impregnation'

Less than ten paragraphs in an hour, so you ought to at least be able to figure out basic grammar and sentence structure for some of the small number of sentences. Somewhere a primary school teach is rolling over in their grave.

A ridiculous, stupid and childish story written by an obviously deranged moron who has never written more than a postcard in his life since the story makes no sense, has no erotic, sensual or sexy storyline it is just simply deranged and in need of a complete overhaul and the writer needs psychological help!

Terrible.

Yuck.... seriously grim

This is awful