by DevlinMea
Great premise.
Lovely buildup.
Close to five stars.
Really would have liked a slower pace jerking off.
Would have liked more dialog about how often he masturbates to thoughts/visions of her. And what he thinks about. And whether he likes her body. And what -- in particular -- he likes the best about her body.
Has he ever seen a naked breast before? Naked ass? Naked pussy?
Could have used some description of her pussy. Shaved? Manicured? Hairy?
Would he like to watch her masturbate while he's masturbating?
Four stars plus.