by FOUNTAINPEN67
A well thought out story with good characterization and dialogue.
I love the title.
Maxine
Are such a great writer with a fabulous mind and a pen that creates the most sensuous and enlightened work of sexual art. I love it and you and Amanda. xoxoxoxo Annette
The story has me breaking out BOB!!! Also has me wondering if the writer is as hot as the words? Waiting impatiently for another well thought out chapter. Oh NO, Bob needs help - going out to buy more batteries to get ready for the next Chapter.
Keep it up!! Your writing improves dramatically with each chapter. Love the character development!!
YOGAKAY
Xoxxo
This is a great story! You're writing is great and the development of the characters are great. The way the story has developed is also awesome. I hope that you will continue the story and give it a proper end. Good luck and happy writing.